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Post by strichnine on Jun 12, 2020 20:22:24 GMT -5
 Hey Guys, here is a card redesign that I made a bit ago. I recently added flavor text to the bottom since there is not much going on with this card. I am open to constructive criticism if you would suggest any changes. Let me know what you think! |
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Post by doctordolemite on Jun 13, 2020 8:31:15 GMT -5
Only critique I would have is to include the character's cards resources. With character cards you need them so that proper events could be used with the characters.
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Post by strichnine on Jun 13, 2020 14:33:56 GMT -5
Yeah, I'll definitely have to add that. Thanks for the feedback!
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Post by Shaolin Yautja on Jun 27, 2020 13:48:54 GMT -5
Only critique I would have is to include the character's cards resources. With character cards you need them so that proper events could be used with the characters. I've checked the original Chest Burster card and the only resource I see is Alien and he has Alien on his Chest Burster custom re-imagined card. I mean I get that if someone prefers the resources and/or restrictions listed horizontally instead of how it was vertically on the original cards. But then for cards that have multiple and numerous resources and restrictions the font for them would have to be adjusted to a smaller. For the Alien resource font on this Chest Burster card it's fine since that is the only resource that card has. |
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Post by strichnine on Jun 29, 2020 12:23:15 GMT -5
Hey Shaolin Yautja, What do you think of this redesign? What do you think of the wording too. I used the word untap instead of ready (and the tap symbol on some cards) because it is a mechanic that everyone understands and I think it will make the game a lot easier to relate to. What do you think? Also, the magic the gathering style wording for Dutch flows better I think.  |
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Post by strichnine on Jun 29, 2020 12:27:20 GMT -5
I just noticed Lethal twice on there, so I just fixed it.
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Post by strichnine on Jun 29, 2020 13:02:08 GMT -5
  What version do you like the best (obviously ignore my mistake of adding Lethal twice) |
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Post by strichnine on Jun 29, 2020 13:35:34 GMT -5
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Post by doctordolemite on Jun 29, 2020 17:25:25 GMT -5
What version do you like the best (obviously ignore my mistake of adding Lethal twice) I like the third version of Dutch personally. |
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Post by strichnine on Jun 29, 2020 17:54:46 GMT -5
Thank you! I really appreciate it. I think that is the design that I am going to go with.
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